As I knock, the front door opens slightly from the pressure of my knuckles, revealing a dark foyer hiding behind it.

--I think the opening to the second part of the story needs to change tense from "I'm standing" to "I stand" and "I'm walking" to "I walk": He stands there like a stature for what seems like forever before I take a few pensive steps towards him. Eddie Van Helsing, aka Edward Hopkins, survived our encounter somehow and escaped capture. “Fine,” I whisper loudly, crossing my arms over my chest. “Really? “What a weirdo.” I say to myself before stuffing the card into my back pocket.

Still nothing.

“Look, ma’am. You invite me to play as well”, “Your dog keeps sneaking into my yard and I have no fucking clue how. “By the way, yer looking mighty suspicious, darlin'.”. Alert neighbor prompts Mill Valley arrest 0. I promise to explain everythin'.”. They didn’t talk about it for three weeks.

He has eyepatch over his left eye, and his one visible eye is so yellowed and bloodshot that it obfuscates the color of his iris almost entirely. With my wife Tessa gone on her expedition with her research team, I’m all alone here, so I figure I may as well go to bed. I look over at the portrait of my loving parents that hangs on the wall across from me, and I don’t know why, but it seems like they’re following me with distrusting eyes. The cars that puttered around the neighborhood did so in a slow, responsible manner, and were always driven by familiar faces. A knock at the door snaps me back to reality.

I’d left a banana pudding for you.” I say. He knew Seonho had a huge crush on him if declaring marriage and trying to kiss him at any chance wasn’t an obvious sign. Now I’ve got to deal with ye too.” Eddie says as he starts stomping towards me, his blade still at the ready. Or is that delusion? “You’re crazy.”, “I can see how I might come off that way. “I’m Gail, I live next door.

“Ai, well I’m not the one invitin' Dracula into me bloody house!

This story is disturbing and chilling and I'm living for it. By Mac Cordell on October 26, 2019 News. Love means messy makeout sessions in their bathroom just before they take a shower, quiet arguments in empty bedrooms when they can’t decide what movie to watch before bed, and drinking too much at gatherings neither approved of just to get a rise out of one another so that they could leave early and go cuddle at home. Confused, I look up, but the man is already gone. They don’t know if Eddie managed to double back and hide it before the police arrived, or if an accomplice was involved. We either need to tell them…or end it.”, “Or, we could do neither of those things and fuck in the conference room instead.”, “What better way to stick it to our parents, hm?”, “I quit today. “Oh...that may have been my fault. He is thin, with a handsome face, despite its angular features. She gave the bottle a final look over before curiosity got the best of her and she retrieved her corkscrew. Calm down now,” the man says in a harsh whisper. They got older, and their feelings got stronger, until one night Junior year, they found themselves making out in the school bathroom during the Homecoming football game. Eddie slashes the doctor across the throat with his machete, sending a streak of blood across the front of my house and Drake DeVille slamming to the ground. As my eyes met his, I let out another yelp against his calloused palm. Before adjourning upstairs to my bedroom, I give the brass knob a couple of good tugs to make sure it's really locked. He knew Seonho had a huge crush on him if declaring marriage and trying to kiss him at any chance wasn’t an obvious sign.

Find the perfect editor for your next book. “Ah, yes. Looking around the bare room, the only items I’m able to make out is a pair of cardboard boxes in the far corner.

“What the hell is going on?” I say, slightly louder than I intended.

I’ve been searching desperately for one >~.

I scramble up the stairs with him right on my heels. His face is covered in a wild bush of a beard, and what pale patches are visible is flush with red.

But right now, still baby-faced and innocent, naive to the hurt of the world, it’s all they need.

They get married fresh out of high school- everyone tells them it won’t last, that they’re too young, that they’ve made some horrible mistake and they know that maybe, in the future, that might be true. Hello! Hamilton Heights, where nothing is peaceful, and everything is suspicious. Let me know about that pudding though, okay?”. Just promise me yer not goin' start screeching.”. Even though my eyes have adjusted to the low level of light, I still can’t make out where the fridge is, so I reach over to where the wall seems to be and feel around for a light switch. Tess and I were practically run out of town due to some nutjob conspiracy that I was secretly a part of Eddie’s team of vampire hunters. I'm pretty sure I have them all corrected now, hopefully. I like how you went with the POV of the vampire's neighbour, as well as the twist of the vampire hunter. :) Loved the little vampire references throughout... "creature of the night," "turned into a bat," setting up the reader and then going an entirely different direction!

“Hello? The question remains: who on earth is he? The houses that lined the perfectly manicured front lawns were all colonials, painted with sensible, muted colors that didn’t detract from the beautiful uniformity of the others. See how many crazy rides we can go on before puking, -Binge watch every single Marvel/DC movie in order, -To the mountains to play in the snow and build snowmen, -Waterfall with the little lake at the bottom. The water is freezing but the view is gorgeous, -Ski lodge to drink hot chocolate and enjoy the snow without freezing, -Camping trip somewhere far away from the city so we can enjoy the stars, -Picnic on the highest rooftop we can find without getting arrested for trespassing, -The museum because fossils are fucking cool, -Manicures and pedicures because who doesn’t love that, -Hike through the Grand Canyon (or Mount Rushmore, or City of Rocks, or somewhere else just as beautiful), -Cliche spot where every high schooler goes to make out, -Sports game (because one of them loves sports so much they rhe other is willing to indulge because it’s cute), -To help one of them adopt a pet (that they eventually end up sharing), -We’ve been dating since my freshmen year and everyone thinks that because you’ve graduated, we’re over.

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